Hero Concept: Shahzor - Cursed Phoenix [Marksman]

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Shahzor - Cursed Phoenix
Marksman
Damage/Burst


Description: A mysterious phoenix from Agelta Drylands. Genesis was a phoenix wandered around the Agelta Drylands hundreds of years ago, a once bountiful nest lies in the heart of the desert believed that it was her place of birth. Over the years she has been seeking people and other races to help and grant harvest. As she wander around the Land of Dawn, she was captured by a group of magicians from Northern Vale and cursed her with the Orb of Destruction. The magicians thought that Genesis was weaken, and they set an expedition to her nest and raided it. But the Orb didn't made Genesis brought down onto the ground, instead, she was frozen and suddenly devoured by the angry magma beneath her. Her nest withered and, all of the sudden, collapsed underneath neatly and without having a single trace. Hundreds of years passed, a treasure hunter found the ruins of her nest. As he went into the center of the nest, a big glowing red and blue egg catched his attention and touched it. The nest glowed red and blue, which scared him and ran away, but she was already awakened, rumbling the sand beneath and rising her nest from below. Lunox and Belerick came to the scene and tamed the newly born phoenix and named herself, Shahzor. Unstable fire and ice covered her whole body, before settling down and spliting both apart. She quickly terrorized the Northern Vale and attack the Magic Academy, as pain and anger still lingers in her heart. But Lunox came into the scene and made her calm. Her hatred to the people with magic still exists, but she wanders around the Land of Dawn to hunt down magicians and punish them.


PASSIVE SKILL: REBORN
Shahzor became a bird of fire and ice, made her changed away from the old Genesis.
Whenever she deals Ice-based basic attacks, she will inflict Slow to the target by 10%-25%% for 3 seconds and adds an ice mark. The mark is stackable until 5 (lasts for 3 seconds). When the stack reaches 5, she will freezes the enemy for 1 seconds.
Whenever she deals Fire-based basic attacks, she will inflict Burn to the target for 1% of Target's Total HP of Physical Damage every second for 3 seconds and adds a fire mark. The mark is stackable until 5 (lasts for 3 seconds). When the stack reaches 5, she will incinerate the target for 200 (+20×Hero Level) True Damage.
Everytime an enemy receives full stacks of the marks, she could only add marks again after a 5 second cooldown.


FIRST SKILL: FIRE AND ICE
Buff
Cooldown: 5 seconds
Mana: 20/30/40/50
Shahzor enhances her next 2/3/4/5 basic attacks. The enhanced basic attacks deals splash AoE effect and doubles the effect of the passive. She also switches her basic attack from Fire-based to Ice-based or vice versa. Acquiring this skill starts with Fire-based basic attacks.
Triggering this skill removes the stacks from the enemies immediately.


SECOND SKILL: FIRE FEATHERS
Damage
Cooldown: 7.5s/7s/6.5s/6s
Mana: 70/80/90/100
Shahzor flies backwards and blows a volley of 5 fire feathers in a fan-shaped area that pierces and travels up to 8 yards. Each feather deals 100/150/200/250 (+30% Total Physical Attack) Physical Damage and burns the enemies by 2%/3%/4%/5% of Target's Total HP of Physical Damage every second for 3 seconds.


THIRD SKILL: ICE FEATHERS
Damage/Control
Cooldown: 7.5s/7s/6.5s/6s
Mana: 70/80/90/100
Shahzor flies backwards and blows a volley of 5 ice feathers in a fan-shaped area that pierces and travels up to 6 yards. Each feather deals 100/150/200/250 (+25% Total Physical Attack) Physical Damage and slows them by 40% for 2 seconds.


ULTIMATE SKILL: CURSED FATE
Buff
Cooldown: 40s/30s/20s
Mana: 100/150/200
Shahzor calls upon the power of the Orb of Destruction with a short delay. She gains 50% movement speed and flies up towards the sky for 2 seconds. Shahzor is invulnerable and cannot be seen. After the duration, she will land below and gains a buff. The passive stacking is reduced to 3 and the cooldown of the effects are removed. Lasts for 8 seconds. She will also have her atrack range doubled.


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Soweirdzz

Its nice concept. Sorry for my last comment hehe. Well the ulti is a little little bit lacking for me. No other problem

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Soweirdzz replied at 2021-7-15 05:58 PM
Its nice concept. Sorry for my last comment hehe. Well the ulti is a little little bit lacking for m ...

Hi! The ultimate is actually good, since it reduces the passive stacking into 3 and it removes the cooldown of the passive so you can spam the Freeze effect in Ice-based basic attack and the Incineration of the Fire-based attacks, especially she's a marksman so she's OP if built with high attack speed and crit chance. Plus the two seconds on the air is good enough to be invulnerable while finding a good spot to land. While she's on the air, she cannot be seen so it's unpredictable where she lands. But I'll try to improve it, thanks!
Edit: I adjusted the damage calculation on the Fire-based basic attacks on her passive, you can check it out, thanks!